Friday, 24 February 2017

camp day 2- beach


the sun shone bright. a grateful sensation of cool water against me, helped my pink tinged skin from hurting as much as it was going to later. the salty water stung my eyes as i clumsily splashed towards my partner, a yellow tube strapped to my sore shoulders.  suddenly a wave crashed against me sending me falling into a muffled world then dragging me across to the side. surprised by this sudden set back i gasped for air before tearing back towards my buddy. fumbling with the gold clasp we finally managed to continue with the next step.  ouch! tripping against the rope i lay sprawled across the sand before chasing my partner back to dry sand. puffed i hesitated before getting back into the water. oh well at least it was her turn to save me now.

2 comments:

  1. wow sounds like a great day from your perspective! 🤗 Im sure it was in everyones. Well done Iris not only for your writing but making it through the day and coming out alive!

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  2. Sounds like you had an awesome time. I wish I could have been there. I like your writing too

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